Slow River 3.13
Thursday, May 8th, 2008
Phoebe really has no obvious respect for formality. Isn’t it great?
I forgot to do comments last time, so I guess I should find two interesting things to say now.
Hmm… Phoebe’s pose in panel 1 isn’t quite right. The one in panel 3 came out okay, but I once again didn’t leave Lisa enough room for dialog without covering up interesting stuff. I need to get used to the idea that something like a third of the panel real-estate should be set aside for dialog - sometimes more.
Okay, that’s one interesting thing. What’s another? Bones was really intense this week. I wonder what the skeleton at the beginning will turn out to be.

