Archive for September, 2007

Slow River 2.9

Thursday, September 27th, 2007

Slow River 2.9

Comments from LisaWhat pretty colors. :)

 

 

Comments from the ArtistHmm… Phoebe’s shirt collar disappears on panel 3. Obviously, it’s a magic shirt, since it couldn’t possibly be that I forgot to ink a line and didn’t notice it.

 

 

 

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Panel 1 (Herbert Farm, Day)

The van is parked by the side of the road. On the opposite side of a fence marked “No Trespassing” the girls are looking around the farm. Phoebe has a pamphlet. Diana has a bag.

(I’m just making stuff up here. Feel free to change the details)

Phoebe: “Jacob Herbert built the original house in 1810. It burned in 1857, but was rebuilt by his son, Jeremiah. The Herberts lived in the rebuilt and expanded house until their mysterious deaths in 1936. The murders of Jeremiah, his wife Martha, and their four children were never solved.

Diana: Oh good. So it’s probably haunted. You see anybody?

Phoebe: Not yet. Probably near the house.

Panel 2 (Herbert Farm, Day)

In a grove of trees with the house not too far away, Diana is getting ready for the summoning.

Phoebe: Protective circle?

Diana: I probably shouldn’t salt the ground here, so I’m going to have to settle for twine and quartz stones. Should be good enough. Stay close. If anyone comes, distract them or something. If I get engulfed in hellfire, put it out.

Panel 3 (Herbert Farm, Day)

Diana sits down in the circle with quartz chunks around at even intervals. She starts channeling power. Phoebe stands off to one side and watches.